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tommyhawk
04-13-2005, 04:05 PM
The single tear drips as a tack
And turns to ice
In the frosty discontent
Of modern human thought
And spiritual malaise

It’s aged mores corrupted
Like sharpened cheese,
Wafer windward through the city streets

Pungent in presence
Constant as a waterfall
The dark and rotting cloud of decay
Snaps the slumber of innocence and weariness
And spotlights the sky with unheeded warnings

And the coldness of the desert gloom
Is alive in the streets of the rustic city
Civilization at a stones toss
Yet incorrigible in the flow of stench
That rots it from within

And these crimes of the shrinking heart
Sinks the spirit like defeated battleships
Under towed as creepy slinks of waste ebbs the deck
Once shiny as a mirror
Reflecting the tide and misty enlightenment
Until the growing anger smeared
And cast the blanket dirt upon
The soul of purity.

TPG 4/13/205

Sheerah
04-13-2005, 05:17 PM
Dang Tom, that's depressing.
Good, but depressing.

Dances w/PURPLE
04-13-2005, 06:18 PM
Tommy, what's going on in your life? hee hee It's like my Haka tribal mask with the thrust tongue and scowling eyes I sculpted...and my friends said "you OK?"

Keep 'em coming. I enjoy your work and get a rise seeing your posting a new one.

Deliriumyes
04-13-2005, 09:16 PM
Simile City!! Nice, Tom.

wolfhound
04-13-2005, 09:31 PM
I like the sad ones.

tommyhawk
04-14-2005, 11:52 AM
Dang Tom, that's depressing.
Good, but depressing.

Thanks

tommyhawk
04-14-2005, 11:54 AM
Tommy, what's going on in your life? hee hee It's like my Haka tribal mask with the thrust tongue and scowling eyes I sculpted...and my friends said "you OK?"

Keep 'em coming. I enjoy your work and get a rise seeing your posting a new one.

Thanks, Purple.
Nothings going on my life other than reading the paper and reacting to the news.