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tommyhawk
03-31-2005, 03:11 PM
Talk,
As words profoundly mock the air
Pale in broadly waylaid beauty

Quiet
The terms of natural contentment
Volumes of excitement
Papers filled with awesome beauty

Speak
The eyes of communal forums
Scream like lions from mountaintops
But a whisper to the final senses
Felt like gentle peddles in the cool breeze

Silhouetted
Is your body next to mine
As your kiss breathes my life

And speaks such to me

- - - Tom G 3/31/2005

Deliriumyes
03-31-2005, 03:31 PM
Very beautiful imagery, Tom. Nicely done.

yesyadda
03-31-2005, 08:59 PM
I've read more of your poetry lately than I've read of ANY poetry in the last 20 years. If this is what I've been missing, then I've missed a lot. Good stuff T.G.

tommyhawk
04-01-2005, 10:10 AM
WOW, thanks Yesyadda! That's a wonderful compliment. I feel honored.

Thank you, Delirium for your appreciation. You always take a second to write your thoughts and send positive energy my way and I love you for that.

Have a nice weekend and be good to yourself, everyone!

Dances w/PURPLE
04-01-2005, 10:21 AM
*sigh*

Excellent.

tommyhawk
04-01-2005, 01:01 PM
*sigh*

Excellent.

Thank you, Dancesw/purple. I love your feedback.

I mean to ask you about your unique and intriguing user name.