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tommyhawk
03-09-2005, 02:17 PM
High spring elevated conscience
Evolved spirit ever heightened
Force as light betrays the night
The call to formless dreams excites

Boundless travels through full channels
Restrict motions of the further form
The reading of days it's uncertain haze
Forefronts the glad quiet persistence of age
Deliriumyes
03-09-2005, 02:36 PM
You really are a childlike soul dreamer, Tom. That was very dreamy and beautiful.
Deliriumyes
03-09-2005, 05:25 PM
I just read it again. I know that I've said this before, but I just love your use of internal rhyme.

"Poetry is a momentary stay against confusion." ~Robert Frost
tommyhawk
03-09-2005, 11:19 PM
I just read it again. I know that I've said this before, but I just love your use of internal rhyme.

"Poetry is a momentary stay against confusion." ~Robert Frost

Thank you, Deliriumyes. That is very kind of you and I appreciate it.
Dances w/PURPLE
03-10-2005, 08:06 AM
Tommy you have such talent. I always look forward to seeing what you have written to share with us.