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tommyhawk
02-14-2005, 09:41 PM
Reach, mighty oak to the edge of the sky
In winter’s grey, the climbing branches high
Stretch like capillaries feeding nature’s orb
Roots replenished soil
Darkened brushstrokes contrast lightened skies
The wonder bounds unto the morning sun
Beauty is the color of the day
A newborn heart
Pure like dripping dew from new spring leaves
Quenching thirsts of suffered age
Drawing day into the heart of timeless love.

----Tom G 2/14/05

I'm not really sure how this one works. I'll take my chances.

cinderella
02-14-2005, 09:55 PM
Wow. I really like this one.
Especially the first 3 lines. Very captivating.

Deliriumyes
02-15-2005, 10:10 AM
Keep taking chances, Tom! That is a beautiful love poem for Valentine's Day.
Well Done!