Jon Anderson - esque poetry

[overState2004]

I think I did pretty well, considering most of my past poetry has been waltz-rythym gothy stuff.

The clouds, they dissipate
thie light of day
Away from a single source
precipitory array

The all too familiar city
Shrouded in the mystery

With beacons that you cannot see
The distance where you cannot be
A moment frayed, betrayed by the calling of your

Only true heart can feel
The grief we feel all to clear

The clearing where we start to hear
The meaning of our present fear
Of losing all we hold so dear,

Where do we go from here?


I had some music floating around between my ears when I thought this up.......wish I knew how to play guitar.

[overState2004]

WOW. That bad, eh?

[yeskat]

Don't worry, Jon has had the same reaction to some of his own creations.

I like it!

[Sheerah]

Not bad at all, OS!

[JJGeers]

Hey Overstate!!

Miss your avatar! Was a lovely one, you know that!

Here's a line my wife and I gave to our priest after our wedding 5 years ago...

[Dances w/PURPLE]

in the language of fragrance...how beautiful.

Nice read this morning from you all. Great effort on the poem and I think we can be our own worse critics. This is a lovely poem.

[overState2004]

Cool! Thanx for the response! I look forward to making it into a song.

JJGeers, I liked the poem, kind of a cross between JA and Hallmark, but that just shows y'all how few influences I know about....lol Good stuff.